I’m afraid I can’t do that, sorry. I simply don’t have the time. I do occasionally provide paid editorial services through Yellow Bird Editors depending on my schedule, and you can inquire about my availability through their website. If you can’t pay for professional feedback at this time, the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators provides a listing of regional chapters, many of which coordinate critique groups for their local members. Also, if you sign up for an in-person or online writing class (such as through the Writers’ League of Texas, GrubStreet or Loft), you might ask your fellow students if anyone is interested in being a critique partner.